Rate My Poem?

or give me some opinions/criticisms?
i ws lookin through a bunch of things and i found a poem i'd written like, half a year ago. it's not my strongest poem and..it's like the most rhymes i've ever put into a poem lol.

i offend with my bend in the world of trends
though im in the blend , im good to pretend
i dress in despise with disguise of surprise
im clever and wise, believe the lies
im hip , im in , im the latest thin
these gestures fake my posture
my composure shows no torture
flawless to the structure , ready for exposure
/take a picture/
emotions hidden in notion ,
i keep this in the motion..
see creativity dispel reality
i shun the pity, this of my ability
i embellish a blemish from a smile to the sleeve
i relish in style 'cus they believe

I liked it a lot.It was witty and cute and i likes your style.I will rate from 1 to 10 a 8" and that''s good.keep writing you shine..

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